#185 - Why Smart People Write Weak Resumes

Hiring rewards clarity more than complexity...

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Happy Wednesday!

One of the more frustrating parts of modern hiring is that a lot of highly capable people struggle precisely because they’ve done too much. They’ve built broad careers, operated across multiple functions, solved different kinds of business problems, and developed experience that doesn’t fit neatly into one category. Then they sit down to write a resume and try to communicate all of it equally.

That’s usually where the problems start.

This week, I want to talk about why smart, accomplished professionals often write weak resumes, why broad experience becomes harder to position during tighter hiring markets, and why the hiring process tends to reward clarity more than complexity.

I’ll also walk through how direction and narrative clarity completely changed one Comprehensive Resume Review client’s job search. After restructuring the resume and simplifying the positioning, the client told me they’d scheduled more interviews in the previous week than they had in the last year, and later mentioned they’d never gotten a job so quickly.

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This week we’re talking about:

  • Why accomplished professionals struggle with positioning

  • How direction changed a client’s job search

  • The best (worst?) job posting of the week

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Let’s get to it!

CLARITY VS. COMPLEXITY

Most weak resumes aren’t written by weak candidates.

They’re usually written by smart, successful people who’ve built complicated careers and genuinely understand the full range of what they’re capable of doing. That’s often the problem.

Experienced professionals tend to resist narrowing their narrative because narrowing feels reductive. They know they can lead teams, improve operations, influence executives, manage clients, solve strategic problems, and operate across multiple functions. Many of them have spent years becoming more versatile, so when they sit down to write a resume, they try to preserve all of that complexity. They want the document to reflect the full picture of who they are professionally.

The result is often a resume that communicates intelligence and experience while making it surprisingly difficult for recruiters to understand where the person actually fits.

I see this constantly with senior candidates, consultants, operators, startup leaders, and people with broad cross-functional backgrounds. They’ll often say some version of: “But I have done all these things.” And they’re right. The problem usually isn’t accuracy...it's positioning.

The hiring process rewards clarity far more than completeness. Smart people understand nuance. They know business problems overlap. They know leadership rarely fits inside one clean category. They understand that strategy affects operations, operations affect revenue, revenue affects hiring, and hiring affects execution. Because they understand how interconnected their work really is, they write resumes that preserve complexity instead of reducing it.

The hiring system isn't designed to understand the most intellectually complete explanation of someone’s career. Instead, it rewards fast categorization. That’s the disconnect a lot of experienced candidates struggle with in this market.

Many experienced professionals are also trying to preserve optionality when writing resumes. They don’t want to be boxed into one path because they genuinely can do multiple things well. So the resume becomes an attempt to keep every possible door open simultaneously.

That usually creates the opposite effect. When every skill gets equal emphasis, the reader struggles to understand what the candidate wants most to be hired for. The document reads more like a list of strengths than a clear professional identity. Leadership, operations, transformation, consulting, execution, and strategy all compete equally for the candidate's attention because the candidate sees all of them as true and important.

And honestly, they usually are. The problem is that recruiters don’t evaluate resumes in the same layered way candidates experience their careers. Recruiters are usually trying to answer a much simpler question very quickly: “Where does this person fit?” If the answer isn’t obvious, the application becomes harder to process... especially with time constraints.

This is why broad backgrounds often struggle more during difficult hiring markets, even when the candidate is highly capable. In tighter markets, companies become more risk-averse and more specific about what they want. Hiring managers start looking for people who feel like obvious lateral fits, and recruiters become even less willing to interpret ambiguous positioning.

Remember, just because someone got an interview and you didn’t, that doesn’t automatically mean they’re more qualified than you are. Sometimes the person moving forward simply communicated a clearer story, or their background mapped more directly to the role. Their resume required less interpretation. Their experience felt easier to categorize quickly.

That’s frustrating for highly capable people because many of them are actually being penalized for the exact thing that made them successful professionally: breadth, adaptability, range, and the ability to operate across multiple environments. That doesn’t mean experienced professionals should undersell themselves or pretend their careers are simpler than they are. But it does mean resumes work better when they prioritize clarity over total representation.

A strong resume doesn’t try to communicate every possible thing someone can do. It focuses attention on the specific narrative most likely to get that person into the conversation they actually want.

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SHAMELESS PLUG

Who knows…maybe you’ll schedule more interviews in the past week than you have I the last year like this client 🤷‍♂️

So how did I help this Comprehensive Resume Review client gain so much traction, so quickly?

Direction.

Nothing about the background was weak. The issue was that the resume was trying to communicate too many things equally.

This client had a broad background with experience spanning multiple functions and leadership areas. Very smart. Very accomplished. But the resume was trying to communicate the full complexity of everything they’d done professionally, which made the positioning harder for recruiters to process quickly.

The review focused heavily on narrowing the narrative, improving clarity, explaining execution instead of just outcomes, and reducing ambiguity. A lot of accomplished professionals unintentionally create resumes that require interpretation instead of recognition. Recruiters are trying to quickly understand where someone fits.

After making the changes, the client told me they’d scheduled more interviews in the previous week than they had in the last year. Later, after accepting a new role, they mentioned they’d never gotten a job so quickly.

That’s why I spend so much time talking about positioning. A lot of highly capable people aren’t struggling because they lack experience. They’re struggling because their experience is being presented in a way that’s too broad, too layered, or too difficult to categorize.

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BEST (WORST?) JOB POST

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About Adam- Recognized as a leading voice on hiring and workplace trends, Adam has been recruiting and providing career advice since 2003, developing high-trust relationships based on honesty with companies and jobseekers. A highly sought-after speaker, he has appeared in numerous outlets, including Bloomberg News, Business Insider, LinkedIn, and CNNMoney. You can find out more about Adam's resume and coaching services here.

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